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T-Kun's 'fficial Instructions (Now With Ramble)
Basically, anything on my mind. Summaries of my day, rants, rambles, thoughts. I've always got something on my mind. Also, I am required by law to inform you that there are Zombies lurking. Have a nice day.
Rain
Running, dashing
All around
Lying bleeding
On the ground

Clouds joining
From them rains
Not any water
But much pain

I'm dying here
I'm crying here
Having lost
What I held dear

The rain washes in
Much more sorrow
The depression will kill me
Before tomorrow

Thinking, dreaming
Fading away
Hoping, wishing
To die today

The weight of the rain
Is pushing me down
I can't get back up
Maybe I'll drown

I'm dying here
I'm crying here
Having lost
What I held dear

The rain washes in
Much more sorrow
The depression will kill me
Before tomorrow

I'll keep on bleeding today
I'm not gonna get better

I'm dying here
I'm crying here
Having lost
What I held dear

The rain washes in
Much more sorrow
The depression will kill me
Before tomorrow

Before tomorrow

Before tomorrow






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KikiSpaghetti
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commentCommented on: Mon Mar 26, 2007 @ 11:14pm
Oooooooh......cool...... idea. Maybe instead of "maybe I can drown" how about
"maybe I could drown" or "maybe I might drown". Flows a bit better. Just an idea from a fellow writer! mrgreen


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