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Shinji Yashimoto had known nothing of war. his mother had kept him innocent until he was seven. Then the Reformation Army struck. They swooped down on the tiny remote village of Shinji's birth, burning the houses to the ground. They slaughtered Shinji's mother before his eyes and took his baby sister, a two year old. He fought back in a furty, but they struck him down and left him for dead. But somehow, he managed to survive. He buried the dead of the village and nursed himself back to health. Every day his anger swelled; one day he left and swore never to return until the war was ended. He wandered, alone, until he came across a gang of teens in a grimy city who took him 'in'. They called themselves the Resistance. Shinji was inithiated and swore in blook to avenge his mother and sister, who was surely dead by now.
Twelve years have passed, and the Resistance has spread into a network of raiding parties. Shinji es now a lieutenant of the main hub, and a public enemy to the nation of Superiance. That nation has almost conquered, but Shiji plans to pull them apart if he can infiltrate their war council and steal a copy of the invasion plans on Causama, a neighboring warring kingdom and the Resistance's home. But, it all goes wrong when Shinji is recognized by a young Superian girl named Tennya. He kidnaps her to avoid being ratted out, and to his horror finds out that she is the General's daughter. But she has great pity and joins the Resistance upon seeing how miserable Superiance is making the world.
The four kingdoms, Causama, Superiance, Miyasama, and Ketsunat hold their breath. The war is at its fiercest; the story begins...


This is a test original story of mine. My mind says it would make good money, but I want to know what the public thinks. So please comment.