Welcome to Gaia! :: View User's Journal | Gaia Journals

 
 

View User's Journal

Report This Entry Subscribe to this Journal
My thought dreams And whatever the ******** I want to be in here..an now, a new story I'm making
Winter Love
Random story I was inspired to make...my first story


___*As I woke up on that cold December day in the east district woods, I look beside me and smiled as I saw that Amber was there and I moved a streak of her gorgeous dirty blonde hair out of her face. She moved off her back and onto her side facing me and opened her eyes slowly

___"Hey baby...Welcome back *I whispered gently before I moved my head over and kissed her just as gently as I had spoken.*

___*Amber moved over and cuddle up with me and kissed me soothingly* "Good morning Shep. I'm glad I'm back from Alamogordo. I missed you so much. All I could think about is the day we get married. I'm glad you asked me to marry you, Hun.*

___*I took my hand and gently caressed the sides of her stomach* I'm just glad you said yes...I know it took a long time but I finally gained the courage to propose. I love you so much Amber.

___*Amber took Shep's hand into hers* I love you to...But it seems like that isn't enough...The word love just gets tossed around like it is nothing...There should be a better word for the love only a family can share

___*Amber kissed Shep happily one more time before they both got up and got ready for a day joy as they both took a week off of work just to be together*

(The name Shep is my RP character name and the name Amber is a random name I pulled from no where this is my first story...so tell me if you liked it)

"Where there's hatred, so justice. Where there's injury, pardon. Where there's doubt, hope. May a swift and certain death befall anyone who stands in my way. Ain't much of a prayer, but it sounds good."
-Richard B. Riddick

gunslinger_shep
Community Member
  • [06/02/09 10:32pm]
  • [12/06/08 03:42am]
  • [11/30/08 03:29am]
  • [04/05/08 06:11am]
  • [02/10/08 12:26am]
  • [02/07/08 02:57am]
  • [01/18/08 01:26am]
  • [01/09/08 02:13am]
  • [12/23/07 12:59am]
  • [12/15/07 06:09am]


  • User Comments: [19]
    it was a ok

    comment kc15 · Community Member · Sun Feb 10, 2008 @ 12:34am
    nice your story sweatdrop

    comment iFresh Yun · Community Member · Sun Feb 10, 2008 @ 12:46am
    Hey its pretty good could use a little more detail like why was she there in Alamagordo and where is that stuff like that wink otherwise it would be really good.

    comment Grieving_wolf_daemon · Community Member · Sun Feb 10, 2008 @ 12:54am
    I meant to leave why she was gone alone so the story would focus more on them not why she left...but thank you

    comment gunslinger_shep · Community Member · Sun Feb 10, 2008 @ 01:10am
    Its very lovely and touches some peoples hearts. Ugh! y am i crying crying its SOOO GREAT!!!!

    comment A_Idiot_who_lies · Community Member · Sun Feb 10, 2008 @ 09:42am
    thank you Pam...I will be making a sequal as soon as I think of a following plot

    comment gunslinger_shep · Community Member · Sun Feb 10, 2008 @ 09:45am
    hey sheps whats up?o yeah the story that u made is not that bad i like it smile

    comment zoey4737 · Community Member · Sun Feb 10, 2008 @ 10:50pm
    Its good for a short story XD

    comment XxTattooPunkxX · Community Member · Mon Feb 11, 2008 @ 08:52pm
    i loved it it was great so who is it about

    comment kla laijeio lkhjoi987689 · Community Member · Tue Feb 12, 2008 @ 01:42am
    it was just a random thing ray...

    comment gunslinger_shep · Community Member · Tue Feb 12, 2008 @ 01:57am
    hey sheps whats up?and r u going to make another story? because i really like it smile

    comment zoey4737 · Community Member · Sat Feb 16, 2008 @ 02:41am
    FINISH IT!!!!

    comment 8847e48362909 · Community Member · Tue Mar 18, 2008 @ 09:41pm
    User Comments: [19]

     
     
    Manage Your Items
    Other Stuff
    Get GCash
    Offers
    Get Items
    More Items
    Where Everyone Hangs Out
    Other Community Areas
    Virtual Spaces
    Fun Stuff
    Gaia's Games
    Mini-Games
    Play with GCash
    Play with Platinum