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evas thoughts for your comments
a story in progress
She sat on the bed right next to the attic window.A cozy and cumfy place it

was.Dark and quiet with a few soft pillows and some warm blankets.Her black and

white high top converse planted on the blankets her grandmother had knitted

several years before.She gazed out the window at all the beautiful sights she was

capturing into her almost as magnifisint drawing.The rain was slowing down,the

leaves just turning,it was early morning and no one else was up except the birds

making the soothing sounds they made each morning.She put her paper and clip

board down onto the window sill and stretched.Then she proceded to make her bed.

It was early yet and she wasnt completely up so she tiptoed down the creeky stairs

trying not to make a single sound.Her cousin lay sprawled out on his floor as his

friend slept soundly on his bed.Lily her other cousin also had a friend over,they lay

on the couch with their movie still playing the sound low and food scattered

throughout the living room.Eva walked into her boy friends room and pushed him

over to the other side of the bed and snuggled up next to him.He turned towards her

opened up his eyes and smiled.They stayed like that for a few minutes then they

decided to get up.she asked if he wanted breakfast and he nodded his head

eagerly."I'm starving."She threw some lime green and black trip pants on and

grabbed a lime green tang top from her drawer then he got up and didnt bother

getting clothes knowing they'd be back soon.She asked him what he wanted to eat

and he chuckled softly to himself.She thought to herself,how disgusting,she shook

her head then laughed as well."Will eggs do?"He nodded."They'ed be fine."Soon her

cousin Lily walked in yawning and scratching her head."Why do you wake up so

early?God damn it make me food!"She said in a playful yet demanding tone."No

make your own." Eva replied silkily."Well you're making timothy some." Lily spat

haughtily. "That's because he's my boy friend."






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moonwonderer
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commentCommented on: Thu Jan 03, 2008 @ 12:16am
A very good start. smile I love your use of description.


commentCommented on: Thu Jan 03, 2008 @ 12:23am
lol its realy 13 pgs long its just i dont want to re write it lol



Evil_Eva78
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darkjuggala
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commentCommented on: Fri Jun 13, 2008 @ 12:14pm
and most of it is about me AWESOME ^.^ it is very much liked mrgreen


commentCommented on: Tue Jul 26, 2011 @ 11:51am
dork >.<



Evil_Eva78
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