I'm about done with chapter one of Mariya's story...and I have a basic plot line for it. I have no idea what I'm calling my vampire/murder/mystery story...so..help with that would be appreciated. If you're wondering how to pronounce her name it is: Mar-e-ah. (like the last syllable from Azmaria) Thanks for those who gave feedback on my sample...I immediantly proof-read my notebook version after the comments. I'll put it on storywrite later...and put the link in my journal so you guys can read it if you want.
basic description: Mariya is a half-vampire who was left on her own at a young age. The villagers of a small village in Europe takes her and raises her as if she was a human. They respect Mariya, and she agrees to only feed when absolutly needed. She even gains a human friend, Ivy. But time looks short for this vampiress when mysterious murders and Mariya is the target of the town's suspicion, she has to prove her innocence. Can Mariya prove that she isn't the cause of the mass murders, or will parish with the rest of them?
 xXSamantha_RXx · Mon Apr 16, 2007 @ 01:31am · 1 Comments |
