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I'm cryin'! Oooh, baby, baby! (Sexy Robinson *purr*) |
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Smokey Robinson, after all these years you are STILL mad awesome, you gorgeous black, green eyed, higher pitched singing voiced man, you. O.O *purr*
I LOVE that song! It's so emotional, and yet sensual. It makes me want to cry and hug and kiss someone at the same time. XD That's just weird. XD However, because of its abilities, it is also an immensely awesome song, which makes Smokey Robinson an awesome singer. XD
Now, this story has been nagging at me for a year. I would almost call it Yaoi because in the end, all that word really translates to it 'meaningless sex.' This story is sort of a horror yaoi... a magic yaoi... and it's just... kinda gross, kinda creepy, kinda freaky, but also kind of normal in its own way.
I don't really have any names for the characters yet except for Nathaniel 'Dan' Mitchell and Sylvia, his fiance. I still need a name for the farmer's daughter. I think Anne or Anna would be fitting, or Pamela, but I'm not sure what it is I want her name to bring across. Normalcy, I guess. Something country that could easily slip into a 'city slickers' world. Her appearance... all I see is dark red hair, blue eyes, tan skin, and a relatively scrawny figure with strong, curvy legs, lean muscular arms, and a flat stomach with a not so flat chest. The girl is built, but still gawky in her own way, especially as her father is not exactly the kind of guy who's going to allow anyone to date his little (nineteen year old) girl. I had originally pictured her as being somewhere around seventeen, sixteen, eighteen at oldest, but I think nineteen fits better for her. It will make more sense and allow the audience to not worry about her quite so much when she leaves home at the end of the story.... close to the end of the story...
Maybe her father should be named Ted... or I could be cheap and name him 'Earl.' XD
Yeah.... Pamela Jones? Pamela Lee? Pamela Ray? Annie Lee? Annie Lee Jones?
... Anne Lee Johnson, AKA Annie Lee Johnson. That sounds kind of country, kind of normal, right? When she makes her escape, she'll just make sure to never bring up her full name in conversation. First and last name should be enough. Anne Johnson, none of this Annie Lee business.
As for Nathaniel 'Dan' Mitchell's part in the story... he's gonna be a victim/murderer. biggrin I don't know how the end is gonna work out: If he'll come back to life or finally die, I don't know. I should just let him die, really. Sucks for Sylvia, but at least she'll know who killed him, even if it takes her a while to figure out who put him in that state to begin with. I wonder if I should start with the prologue... that one's mostly in the third person, and it's Nathaniel's story, if you will. The first chapter, if you will, should open up with Anne talking about her father and herself, and finally how the whole mess with Nathaniel started. It works itself out in my mind as I go along.
Basically, when I'm writing a story, what it really is in the end is bullshit. I'm bullshitting you the entire time. biggrin XD >.< I don't like it, but that's what all stories are, when you think about deeply enough. They're utter BS, made for your enjoyment. I'll feel a little bad that it's just BS that I came up with, but if you enjoyed it, then I'm glad you liked my work and I would love to write some more BS for your enjoyment in the future. XD
 Sakura Moonflower · Mon Sep 04, 2006 @ 09:22am · 0 Comments |
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