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Blisters You told me that you loved me And that you wanted to be with me for a long time. Then you ran off with him, Leaving me to fall into the shadows. You held my heart in your hands But you let it go and it fell to pieces. The pain you left me Sent my soul spiraling, Spiraling into the pits of misery. I gave you my heart But all you did was let it fall to pieces. Now I have blisters from the pain, The pain you put me through. I showed you that I loved you You thought it was just a game. You left me, now its game over, Game over for me. At first you made me think That this would last. I was a fool to think That this would continue. A fool to think That you actually loved me. I gave you my heart But all you did was let it fall to pieces. Now I have blisters from the pain, The pain you put me through. © Feedback if you please I have created the closest I will ever get for making an Avi of Arcadis: [img:6d9b0ab788]http://imagizer.imageshack.com/img537/7164/kpsANk.png[/img:6d9b0ab788] It's a bit expensive so donations are greatly appreciated smile

Posted by: Draconis Alduari Wed Nov 11, 2009 @ 10:10pm

I have created the closest I will ever get for making an Avi of Arcadis:

[img:6d9b0ab788]http://imagizer.imageshack.com/img537/7164/kpsANk.png[/img:6d9b0ab788]

It's a bit expensive so donations are greatly appreciated smile

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Commented on: Thu Nov 12, 2009 @ 12:57am


	At first you made me think That this would last. I was a fool to think That it would last. A fool to think That you actually loved me. This stanza seems oddly repetative... Maybe you should revise them slightly. But OTHERWISE!! I actually really like it. Good job!

Commented on: Thu Nov 12, 2009 @ 01:00am


	I gots an idea for the revisement... give me a min. EDIT I revised it.

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Commented on: Thu Nov 12, 2009 @ 01:11am

Commented on: Thu Nov 12, 2009 @ 01:15am


	I got the inspiration for this one from being dumped by my recent girlfriend... Depression after being dumped really helps in writing music. I have created the closest I will ever get for making an Avi of Arcadis: It's a bit expensive so donations are greatly appreciated smile

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Commented on: Thu Nov 12, 2009 @ 11:39pm


	It seems more like a poem than a song but that's probably because I don't know what the music would sound like. It's really good though.

Commented on: Sat Dec 05, 2009 @ 04:40pm

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