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Is Harmony to Naive Ears

A long time ago I lost the meaning. Something happened to me and I don't even know what. What I write has no story; no inspiration. Instead they are lines with words; a weak attempt in capturing emotion that I lack.

TheCrashing Sound of Love
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Posted: Sat Dec 06, 2008 @ 12:56am

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	Distortion Bright light that burns my face Consumes my skin as your dark shade distorts me, and they laugh.

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This account is male, because I can't compare him to me. I'm a girl. And I know I won't compare myself to a perfected male pixel. That's why I made sure this account would be male.
Am I still pretty to you?
Tell me in my Profile.

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Ode-Melody
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Commented on: Tue Dec 16, 2008 @ 07:53pm


	The stanzas aren't very connected O__o. The first one also needs punctation. Perhaps expand on your ideas more and the stanzas might connect themselves.

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