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New For Fun Story
Yup. It's a new for fun story. Just to let all of you know, the story is going based off my day dreams but this one is going to be like a side story. I just finished the Prologue a few days ago but I just decided to work on Chapter 10 of Soulless Affections to get it over with and as you can see, I got it done.
So this new story is going to be called A Mirror's Relfection.
So here is the Prologue of this story and please comment on what you think about it!!!


A Mirror's Relfection: Prologue


I ran through the forest as fast I could, as fast as my legs would let me. I clutched my left arm, which was bleeding severely. Then, I felt my foot get caught in a branch and I fell onto the ground. I stood up, staggering a bit. I started walking then, breathing quickly because of my running. I’m not going. I am not going back to that place. Damn it! I don’t have anything that can close my wound. I looked at myself and that black spaghetti strapped nightgown that Keisuke gave me that went down to a little over my thigh. I had no shoes on or a sweater to keep me warm. Just this black nightgown. I looked back, clutching my bloody left arm. I could see the smoke rising from the castle, hearing the ear-splitting noise from those explosions.
The earth shook again and I fell down to my knees. Normally I wouldn’t have fallen to my knees so easily. I felt so weak and so tired. I wish I could sleep right now, but I can’t. I have to get out of here and find some place peaceful to rest so I can use my powers again.
I tried to move my legs but it was no use. I guess that I’m too tired to move on anymore; or was it….
I shook my head. I looked back again, seeing the smoke rise up into the air.
I turned sharply back around as I noticed a strange mist covering the forest and around me until I could barely make out anything.
A figure then stood before me. I looked up at the figure, sitting there helplessly as I made out the sound of a blade being drawn from its sheath.






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batmanluver01
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commentCommented on: Wed Nov 12, 2008 @ 03:37am
Sounds pretty cool so far, keep it comin'!


commentCommented on: Wed Nov 12, 2008 @ 01:41pm
Sweetness. Aerean, do you think I should post my new Prologue?
I sent it to you in your B-day letter. ^^



Masha-sama17
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ustan-sama
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commentCommented on: Wed Nov 12, 2008 @ 02:30pm
I think you should! It was really good!!


commentCommented on: Wed Nov 12, 2008 @ 10:49pm
Okay! I'll do it some time soon! hee hee ninja



Masha-sama17
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Riku Hitsugaya 92
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commentCommented on: Sat Nov 15, 2008 @ 03:07pm
Looks pretty good can't wait to read more ^_^


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