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Raven's Crossroads
Ok so this is my story that I am attempting to write><;; I also am making a list of my characters. I would love it if people would read and comment on this. it would really help me^^
7th Attempt
~there is a character profile telling about all the important people^^ Check it out if you want to know more^^~


The elderly man,Mr.Etet we'll call him, was walking through the forest letting his sense come over him. 'I can feel someone in my forest!'He thought out aloud. He continued on his walk following the feeling to the new invaders.He would dispose of them easily. He soon came upon a cottage where when he looked inside there was a young man sleeping on the couch.His long shaggy brown hair covering his eyes. "The young master Lycan!" he said surprised. He continued to look into the house and noticed another young man,or so he seem on the outside. "Master Abysey!" he exclaimed. About to turn away he sensed another closing in fast.He waited by the window he looked in. The front door burst open revealing the young princess Leyli. He grinned knowing himself lucky. He quickly stole away and returned home within minutes.
He pushed open the doors to the old abandoned church he used as a hideout and headquarters. He walked down the center isle.Not noticing the moving shadows around him.
He reached out to open the door to the preacher's office, it led down to his layer underground. Before he could turn the door knob something went stright through his heart.The sharp, pointy spear gleamed golden in the dim light.A light blood trial dripped from his mouth as he stared open eyed at the dark door ahead of him.Morzon walked up behind him
"Should have been smarted mate." he quickly thrust his teeth into his neck finishing him off. Morzon stared at him when he crumpled to the ground.Lucas appearing at his side.
"So he did find her here." he remarked looking down at his father's corpse. "Tis a shame he couldn't live to see my wedding day uh." he looked up to Morzon.
Morzon grinned at him "Yes it is a shame." he pulled out the spear and walked out of the church.Lucas in tow. They disappeared into the darkness heding in the direction of Leyli's new home.
Meanwhile at Leyli's house Abysey had woken up and was staring out the window. He felt something bad was happening.Or going to happen. He sighed and looked back at Leyli and Victor. "Sorry Guys I have to go."
Leyli looked up from the plate of food infront of her. "Why? I just finished cooking and you have never passed up food?!"
Abysey laughed replying "You are not the worlds best cooker Leyli.Though I would like to stay I have to get back to your father and discuss some important hell matters. You see." Leyli nodded and waved him out the door. Abysey left the house quickly and disappeared into the night. He eventually came upon Lucas and Morzon. He stopped and smiled. "Hello fellows!" he said pleasently.






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Penultimate Fantasy
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Sat Aug 30, 2008 @ 04:20am


Interesting, I like!


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