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The Happy Raven [5]
CHAPTER 5! DUH DUH DUH DUH!!!

Discalimer: You know it already

Story so far: Raven is in pain..mysterious men showed up from Raven's past..is this interconnected?

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"Raven!" Everyone ran to her, including Sakura. She knew that this girl was her enemy. But she was also a friend. Sakura was worried. Sakura lifted up her hand. It glowed yellow. She put it from the place of her collar bone to the bottom of her navel. "This isn't good. Her chakra is unstable. And there's a poison causing it..if I do anything right now..it might harm her..and kill her!"

Kakashi was frantic. He looked at her sides and then at the part that Raven was covering with her hands. He lifted them up to find a kunai knife right in her gut. The kuani was bloodied up but he could make out a small out line of a surgeon's needle and vial of poison in it. He took out the knife and Raven cried out in pain. "ARRGAH! AH!!"

She looked like she was on the brink of tears. Maia, who didn't rush to Raven walked over boredly. "Whats a matter?"

Naruto looked up from the scene. "WE NEED TO FIND SHELTER!"

"Why?"

Sai stood up with a map in his hands. "She is injured we need a sanitary and safe place so she can recover. Hey idiot. I found a place."

Naruto glared at Sai but he kept it down. He will beat him down later for that remark. "Where?"

Maia didn't like how people were ignoring her. She pushed the Sakura and Kakashi out of the way and inspected Raven. "You look fine to me." She stood up and straightened her kimono. "Besides. I don't want to go to some ickly town."

Sakura could not believe what she heard. This b***h of a princess didn't care for Raven! Sakura grabbed her by the collar and dragged her back to her teacher. "Sorry. But we are going. Weather you like it or not!" Sakura grabbed the chair thingy and got it close to Raven. "Here put her on it." Kakashi shook his head and picked her up, bridal style. "No, I'll get there fatser. I'll meet you guys there. I know the town. They have a hot spring. That would be good for her after she gets healed up. I'll heal her up as much as I can. You guys just get there fast okay?"

They all nodded and Kakashi lept off. Halfway to the town Raven was gasping in pain from the shock of the ride. "I'm sorry Raven..please..Just a little further." She whimpered and nodded. She clung on to Kakashi like a kitten to it's mother and bit down on his vest. Tears sprung from her eyes and Kakashi felt himself dying on the inside. "Don't worry, we'll get to a hosptial right away." She shook her head fast. "No! Ahh...no no hospital..please" She went back to moaning in pain and he went faster. He got to the village and lept to a hotel. He paid entry for all of them very quickly and picked Raven back up. He ran off to the room and locked the door. Kakashi laid her down slowly and steadly onto the ground and took out a wrap and such from his first aid kit. He was now hesitant..and he chuckled.

He, the great Kakashi Haktake, was hesitant about touching a girl..stripping her so he could help her wound. She groaned again and he went up and sushed softly. "Don't worry. Shussh." She nodded weakly and grabbed her mesh top and took it off. She still had her bra on so it was exactly what you would call stripping but Kakashi was blushing never the less. "Um..okay..could you try and keep still just for like a couple of minutes?"

She shook her head and writhed again in pain. "It's...it's..i'm so hot..."

'Yes you are..' He shook his head. 'Gah! She's in pain! Don't say these things in front of her for gods sake!' Kakashi ran to the bathroom, grabbed and wash cloth and dowsed it in cold water. He came back and rubbed her face gently with it. She finally calm down and now he could work on the wound. He could take out the poison no problem but he forgot the jutsu for it. "I should have paid more attention to those classes with Tsunade. Damn't! Ain't I the one that always says a ninja must be prepared?!" He then remembered a technique he learned from his father. He saw her eyes closed and shook his head. It was the only way. He took off his mask and put his mouth on the wound and started to suck. After a few minutes he came back up and spat out the window the poison contained blood. He wiped his mouth and put some healing herbs on a bandage before pressing it onto her wound. Then he wrapped her up and sat down heavly. The bleeding had finally stopped and she had stopped writhing in pain. If it wasn't for her chest going up and down she might have looked dead. Kakashi picked her up again and set her on the bed and pulled the covers up to her chin. He sat in the other bed heavly and wiped his mouth again.

"Thank you for healing my mistress Hatake Kakashi. Jonin of the Village Hidden in the Leaves Kohonagakure"

Kakashi jumped and turned around to find a woman of pure perfection looking at him. Her eyes her red and orange. They looked like they were on fire. Her sking was as pale as the moon and her hair was red clashing with orange. Her fingers were long and slender with red nailpolish. Her arms were encircled with sealing tattoos and so were her long legs. She wore gold knee high boots and with a red jewel in the knee. She had shackles for bracelets and severed chains were hanging off of them. Her lips were a blood red and her smile was as white as snow. She came closer to Kakashi in a second and leaned down to him. "You are now a pheonix friend." She kissed him on the lips and he saw darkness.

**--**

Kakashi was sitting under a cherry blossom tree. The petals dancing around them as a nice spring breeze comes through the branches. Kakashi was invited to sleep. He was so tired from his mission and from the ranting of Rin and such. He really wished she would just give up. She was a great friend and all but still. He had someone else in his heart right now. Someone he could count on ever since..well..that day.

"Kakashi! There you are!" He looked over and saw the girl he loved...he didn't know her name. He knew why. Everytime he had these dreams he would always asked her name and each time her mouth would say something..and he would not hear it he gave up on it..and since he never see's her face clearly anymore he doesn't try to look at her anymore. Not like she complains or anything. "So...what ya doing?"

"Mm..nothing..just enjoying the breeze."

"Yeah, the breeze is nice today." She sat next to hima and put her head on his shoulder. "I've missed you."

"Really?"

"Yeah...I will always miss you."

Kakashi nodded. He didn't dream of her in awhile. It was weird. Everytime he closes his eyes..well eye..he always sees Rin and Obito dying infront of him. Like all his other old dreams. Now he is finally back in a dream he wants to be in.

"Why won't you look at me?"

He kept his stare in front of him. "You never complained about it before."

"Oh..I was just wondering really."

"Well, when I look over to you..I don't see you..I see...well.."

"Oh I get it..you want to be alone."

He felt her weight disappear and he paniced. "No! Thats not what I meant." He grabbed her hand and swallowed. Waiting for the shadowed face. But this time he did see a face. It was Raven's face. She looked down on him with confused eyes. "Then what did you mean?"

He pulled her down to him and hugged her hard. "Nothing..nothing.." Raven returned the hug and snuggled in. "Yay! You are looking at me again!"

Kakashi let go and looked at her beautiful brown eyes. He smiled. Yep..this was Raven. Not some scary demonic nightmare version. It was the nice version..the version he had grown to love. Raven leaned in closer and pulled down his mask but kept her eyes to his eye. "I came here today to say one thing."

"What?" His heart was beating hard. Was she going to kiss him? What was she going to do?

"Thank you..for saving my life."

Kakashi mouth opened up. "Huh?" He didn't finish his question. Her mouth covered his and he was in bliss. Her tongue entered his mouth and carssesed it. Kakashi didn't want her dominating him so he it her tongue lightly then soothed the bit with his own. Then they battled for dominance. Kakashi won. After a couple of minutes they came back up for air and Raven smiled. "My my, I didn't think you could do that Kaka-kun."

"Huh? Kaka-kun?"

Raven giggled and broke away from the embrace. She then ran off and motioned him to follow her. Soon they were in a wooded area and Kakashi was hot on her giggling trail. As soon as Kakashi caught up with her he grabbed her hand and smiled. "Caught you!"

She looked back and smiled but she burst into flames. He gasped and stumbled backward. Soon the whole forest was enveloped in fire. Kakashi tried to find a way out but he couldn't he was trapped.

"A scarecrow is trapped in a ring of fire. What is he to do? Get burned or do the fire's will?"

Kakashi turned around to find the same girl he saw earlier looking at him with the same fire burning in her eyes. Her smile wasn't sweet. It was wicked. She smiled in more when he just stood there. Then he nodded. "What do you ask of me?"

The woman smiled. "The same that Lady Tsuande asked of you. Exactly what you did." She slowly faded away and so did the scenery so he was in a place of darkness.

"Keep Raven safe!"

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Author's Corner

Raven: I can't feel my stomach!

Kakashi: I wonder why?

Raven: I'm sorry...I was just really hungry..

Kakashi: I thought you hate sushi.

Raven: Like I said..I was really hungry

Kakashi: You want to say tell the readers?

Raven: SURE! ^ ^ Review please!!!

Kakashi: She's also going to be just fine..as long as she doesn't eat anymore raw frog.

Raven; Hey! I thought it was something completely different! ..(It was also really good..I'm allergic apparently)

Kakashi: Byes then!

Raven: BYE! AND DON'T FORGET TO REVIEW!

*echos review*

Raven and Kakashi: Whoa....






User Comments: [3]
Stoopid Canadian
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Sun Aug 17, 2008 @ 12:41am


*runs next to kakashi and raven*ahem*yells shoes as loud as possible*sweet echos biggrin


cannibalize
Community Member





Sun Aug 17, 2008 @ 02:25am


YYYAYYYYZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh mm gee!! manga ish awesssummehhhh x'33


Stoopid Canadian
Community Member





Sun Aug 17, 2008 @ 11:10pm


*tackles kakashi*gimmi food!*looks up at raven*god dammit women gimmi the wheel!! scream


User Comments: [3]
 
 
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