Welcome to Gaia! :: View User's Journal | Gaia Journals

 
 

View User's Journal

How Disturbing.
It's a Gaia Journal. You know the drill. Stuff you don't care about, written by someone you don't know. :0
Poem-a-Day Round Sixteen
So... tired. Dx This is from an exercise, but it fell apart before I was done and I couldn't put it back together. Enjoy if you can. I just want some sleep. @A@



Round Sixteen

The hibiscus was "too gaudy" for you,
thistle-woman.
Well that's all right.

But

it struck you like an arrow
(didn't it?)
when you found out that the distant roaring
in the night was trucks on a highway;

you slathered on a laugh but
in your heart you needed
beasts across the horizon
that you couldn't see.

When the whirlwinds struck Babylon
our house fell in and girl
we could not linger there

because baiting lines with gold yields
nothing: now ain't that anticlimactic?






User Comments: [1] [add]
VicariousDrivel
Community Member
avatar
commentCommented on: Wed Jun 06, 2007 @ 05:02am
A poem a day is a cool thing to do! It didn't put me to sleep, so thats saying something! Keep up the good work!


User Comments: [1] [add]
 
 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum