~Tell me what you think. It isn't finished yet, I just wanted some feedback on it~
It was the first day of the second semester when I first saw her. The most beautiful girl I have ever had the pleasure of seeing was sitting right next to me. What a lucky day.
I found out that she was new at our school. I couldn’t help but keep looking over at her. Her long black hair and olive skin tone made me want to get to know her. I wanted to know everything about this mysterious new girl.
When the bell rang she was waiting at the door. Her perfect face was smiling at every student that passed by. When her blue eyes rested on me, she walked over to me and said “I noticed you looking at me. I bet you don’t even know my name”
I stood there for a minute not knowing what to say. My mouth closed and opened a couple of times before I finally said “I want to know you. I want to know everything about you. Your life, what you do, where you came from. Just everything.”
She just smiled at me and said the six words I will never forget “Be careful of what you wish”
I watched her walk down the hall. I must have stood there for ages wondering what she meant, This girl had caught my attention in just one conversation. How could someone do that?
As soon as I got home I went to my room and just sat there. Remembering her perfect beautiful face. The sound of her voice. The way her smile brightened up the hall way. What was it about this girl? Why could I not stop thinking about her?
The next day I hurried to class hoping to see her. Maybe today she would tell me what she meant.
As soon as I walked into class I could see her smiling at me. Her beautiful face took my breath away. This feeling was amazing.
I walked slowly to my desk. I found a small note placed at the center. It had my name printed on the top. I sat down and unfolded it.
Ayden-
My name is Lovella. It means wolf.
I stared at the paper for a while before looking over to her. Lovella. What a unique name. What a unique girl.
After that day she began leaving notes on my desk everyday. I learned more and more things about her. I found out that she just moved from Illinois, she was very homesick, and she had a collection of horses, even though most people think it’s childish.
Her favorite time of year was fall because it signaled new beginnings. Her favorite word was embrace because it sounded so warm, and her favorite color was black because it was a mixture of every color.
 Fateshand27 · Fri Oct 02, 2009 @ 05:33pm · 0 Comments |
