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Hello this is winTer.berrie. I like to eat ramen, and rock wall climb. I like to write fictional stories. My journal is about if there is a now. There is always is a befor and after, but never a now. please comment.
What if
What if the world was made of grays and blues
what if skin colors were'nt different hughes

What if there was'nt a breeze in the air
what if a shoe didnt have its pair

What if humans didnt have a soul
that in their heart was just a hole

What if the sky was really black
what if mothers and fathers never really came back

Well I would say"gray and blue are my favorite colors"
I would say"at least my papers would'nt be carried away by the wind"
That black is a very calm color
and that my cup is always half full






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Dessertless.Bunny.FouFou
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commentCommented on: Mon Apr 09, 2007 @ 11:04pm
It...it's so...beautiful...
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commentCommented on: Tue Apr 10, 2007 @ 12:33pm
O:

I love it.
Its inspired me!



xx Pirate S K E L L Y
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Salemander
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commentCommented on: Tue Apr 10, 2007 @ 11:33pm
I LOVE THIS. I LOVE YOU!!! geez...i really dont no wut to say...cause this is beautiful!!!! and it really reflects your personality!!
the way ur poem started off kinda sad but u made it so happy in the end with ur positive-ness was...BRILLIANT!!!!!!
GAAA!!! UR JUST A BUBBLE OF LUVV!!!!!! i cant get over it!
...thats why we, your friends, luv you!!
heart heart 3nodding mrgreen 3nodding heart heart
BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!
i applaud you and your writing skillz!!


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