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Some of my first writing Critique came today. I didnt expect the hailing of a masterpiece, but i also didnt expect to be torn apart by grammar and format*slaps face* (That kinda stuff sets ME off!) So i changed up ALOT in my first sample. I can only hope that CH.2 and the rest of the book overall is recieved with alittle more welcome in critics once im done revising it because ive kind of become alittle attached to my story. The development so far is making me excited about a possible career in writing.