Welcome to Gaia! :: View User's Journal | Gaia Journals

 
 

View User's Journal

Report This Entry Subscribe to this Journal
-Katana-


[-KatanaMaster-]
Community Member
avatar
11 comments
Ive decided to write a story online, just for fun. Ill do it bit by bit, so if you want to read it, youll have to be patient.. heh.

Striking impulses of unbearable pain shot throughout his body. The glistening blade; reflecting the overlooking moon, pierced his chest; sending him crashing to his knees. A sudden silence overtook the area, all of nature ceased its action. The bitter wind no longer blew, and the furtive animals halted in their tracks; curious as to what had happened. Blood spurted out of the wound as the elegant blade was withdrawn. A blank stare dominated his face, as he fell to the hard, cold ground; which seemed to be deriding his futile efforts. His vision, now midnight black, he was powerless to stop his soul from departing his body.

A stunning figure stood there, towering over the lifeless body. His demeanor was relaxed and his breathing steady; it seemed as if he was not remotely bothered that he had just killed a man. His expression appeared pleased, but the black headwrap around his face covered an eye, making it hard to truly tell. A small breeze picked up, blowing his long, free, brown hair which beset his face nicely. He put away his blade into a back mounted sheath that was partially covered by a brown sash which hid most of his upper body. His arms revealed the leather armor underneath; which seemed to be crafted by an expert tailor.

"Ignorant fool", he remarked, insulting the already dead man. "You were wrong to ever associate yourself with me."

Content with the outcome of the encounter, he turned and left the scene, leaving the man to fade away with the night.






User Comments: [11]
YamiTsuichi
Community Member
avatar
comment Commented on: Thu Mar 29, 2007 @ 02:10am
wow


comment Commented on: Mon Apr 09, 2007 @ 06:18pm
haha. love the katana thingy. i put it in my journal too! lol



moleygrace
Community Member
avatar
Kaiku-chan
Community Member
avatar
comment Commented on: Tue Apr 24, 2007 @ 08:55pm
Nice.


comment Commented on: Thu Apr 26, 2007 @ 09:05pm
im one of the ppl who still rocks!! ^^ its on my journal!



moleygrace
Community Member
avatar
J u i n c h i
Community Member
avatar
comment Commented on: Tue May 22, 2007 @ 11:19am
wow thats really good but for some reasonthe discripsion of the man how killed that guy has your discripsion any explenation jk lol blaugh


comment Commented on: Wed May 30, 2007 @ 01:16am
Ohhhhh this is good biggrin it's almost addicting as a fanfiction waiting to update.



Shadows-Night
Community Member
avatar
MagicallyDeliciousAngel
Community Member
avatar
comment Commented on: Sun Jun 03, 2007 @ 02:54pm
nice


comment Commented on: Sat Jun 23, 2007 @ 04:52pm
That sounds EMO!!! D: lol heart i love you!



Duckasawr
Community Member
avatar
moleygrace
Community Member
avatar
comment Commented on: Wed Jul 04, 2007 @ 11:27am
did you draw that, nice..................


comment Commented on: Tue Dec 18, 2007 @ 08:36pm
truely fasinating
u do have some raw talent there
my writing is not as good as ur's i must admit



T3ddyB3arL0v3
Community Member
avatar
sakura-girl-818
Community Member
avatar
comment Commented on: Sun Jan 13, 2008 @ 03:34am
you story is cool but check out mine and i didn't know you where a poet it's so discriptive and i looks like a real poet rote it-^^- heart


User Comments: [11]
 
 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum