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This is a place where all can see how messed up i'm am in the head so read at your own risk.
Poem The Pian Of lOve Loss
What is love without loss?
We never know if we love or loved
Until we no longer have it.
Love brings us joy and happiness but,
More often then not it brings us pain,
A kind of pain one would do almost anything,
To get ride of,
A pain that tares at your heart and rips out your,
Soul. Until it has you on you’re knees crying,
And praying for it to go away,
Until you lie on your back gasping for air,
Wishing you had not a heart or soul,
To be hurt or to feel the loss of love,
Your eyes go out of focus from the tears,
That still swells there. Your breath grows slower,
And more shallow. Then to find that you no longer care. You no longer hat or love,
Your heart and soul have gone and left you empty,
Your tears and sobs, pains and prayers,
Go away. You arise to find that you,
Traded loves pain of loss for the pain,
Of having nothing left inside,
So we can never love again or feel the pain of,
Loves loss which lets us know that we had,
Loved and knew how to love,
Now we shall never have love again.






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xXAngelic LiesXx
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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 14, 2006 @ 05:37am
It's so sad, but oh so true, am I right?
Too bad I can't feel anything. I suppose it's a blessing in disguise if love hurts that much?
Msybe that's why I have all those things happen in our games, to try and feel something.

But yeah, I have officially commented on this poem, since you keep looking for a comment on it. I hope this cheers you up ever so slightly. 4laugh Love youuuu!!! heart


commentCommented on: Mon Aug 14, 2006 @ 07:18pm
Thank you for doing that I really wanted some one to look at it but no one ever does.



KaboomyBoom
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Dust500
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commentCommented on: Sun Jan 21, 2007 @ 06:16am
your poems hit the heart. Deeper then any bullet. kudos for making me cry


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