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I am the broken mirror A twisted reflection no less A reflection of what i once was This i must confess Last night you said you loved me I guess it wasn't real Because this morning you denied it I cant ignore how i feel Because when you took my heart I didn't complain So now i'm shattered And you're all to blame I tried to put myself back together But the regret became too great So now i sit here crying Trying to bear this mangled fate So now I'm a broken mirror A bloody reflection no less A reflection of what i was before you This is the only thing I'll confess...

Posted by: [SoCk RaWkEr] Thu May 11, 2006 @ 12:45am

The Girl Who Rawked Your Socks Has Left Gaia

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Commented on: Thu May 11, 2006 @ 01:07am


	You have very good poetic skills. This poem will totally fit in my misunderstood genre. I love the definite rhyme scheme and the doubtfulness. Some people seem to feel like this everyday until they find something that causes their drives to move. Your poem is very good keep up your work. -Spawn

Commented on: Thu May 11, 2006 @ 08:55pm

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