This is a small bit from a story I'm writing. This was after Orian, the country Jeina's ruler, made his best friend a Half-Dragon. It doesn't end well for Luke.
Luke lay in Orian's hand, his body alight in unimaginable pain.
Orian had just given him his essence. Luke was now half-dragon, the new ruler of Jeina.
But it hurt, a lot.
Orian had to engulf him in flames that was both freezing and burning, but that wasn't the worst part.
While the fire-ice swallowed him whole, wings literally burst from his back and horns broke through his skull. His ears elongated and his teeth got a slight point to them.
He was bleeding from his back and head,staining his once crisp suit, as he panted for breath.
" You should have warned me." He growled at his friend,head down from the pain.
Orian shrugged his giant shoulders and looked him in the eye. " I did, I said this would hurt a little."
" A little!" he nearly screamed." I felt like I died at least five times!"
" No need to be melodramatic, I think I liked it better when you were quiet and silently gasping for breath."
Luke and Orian just glared at each other before the pain hit Luke again, making him nearly pass out.
Tell me what all of you think. Constructive criticism is welcomed and encouraged!
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