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The Muse Says....
"Sinful Silence"
Damn.....January was the last time I entered something?!? I need to be more inspired, I guess. I'm not sure if I like the format, but I love the thought behind this.....

"Sinful Silence"

I love you for the danger that you are;
I hunger for the woman you will be;
I mourn for what was taken from ourselves;
I'll love you 'til I draw my final breath.

If Eden again graced this tarnished world;
No other would I take to have as Eve
And I would eat of that forbidden fruit
As long as you held equal share of sin.

For in such sin would beauty manifest
And bring us to those places once removed.
But when that Knowledge fully gained was ripe
Then let us share ourselves mind, body, soul.






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commentCommented on: Mon Nov 29, 2010 @ 08:48pm
I keep reading more of poems and they are absolutely beautiful. Actually, I'm now inspired to draw something based on some of these. Wonderful job, and I love the way you write these. (Speaking in terms of diction.)


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