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Hi guys! This journal is my story journal. In this journal I will send stories for you guys to read, and your allowed to comment them. But please if you have nothing good to say then don't say anything.
The Journey to Heaven

The last thing I saw before I died was a bright lights and car honk.

When I woke up I found myself in a white room. In the white room was a man in a black suit, behind a big desk. In front of the big desk was a black button and a golden key. Then the man in the black suit pointed to a chair in front of the desk. I sat down and stared at the man's blue eyes. Then the man spoke in a beautiful calm voice, "Please choose. The black button or the golden key. If you choose the black button you will get one million dollars, but someone will die." I looked at the man, puzzled. "If you choose the golden key you will leave this room, and never see me and the one million dollars ever again." I stared at the black button and golden key, pondering. Then the man in the black suit transformed, he grew black wings, a beak and claws. I just sat there terryfied. Then the man yelled in a horrible eerie voice," Choose the black button! Choose the black button." Then my hand and arm started moving slowly toward the black button. Then I heard a tiny voice in my head say," Don't do it. Don't do it! If you pick the black button you'll regret it!" Then I quickly pulled back my hand and reached for the golden key. The man transforemed back into a beautiful angel. Then he pointed towards a golden gate. I sat up and walked towards the golden gate, but when I tried to open it, it would not open. Then I remembered the golden key, and pulled it out of my poket. I put the key in the lock and it opened. I walked in, and I found myself in a beautiful land of clouds. Then I understood, I died and now i'm in heaven. The room I was in before was a jugment room, and the last memories I had before I got in the jugment room was my cause of death.

No matter what, even if your going through a hard time you still have that little person in you head.

Please comment this story, and tell me if you like it! biggrin






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XxDave_LerandxX
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commentCommented on: Wed Apr 07, 2010 @ 09:59pm
this was a really awesome story... in fact i think it is the best yet... in reality i have been pronounced dead for a couple of minutes when i was younger but when i woke up i saw a man in white just starring at me... he told me that it wasnt my time yet then he closed my eyes and i woke up again sitting on a table. I believe that the man i saw that day was God and he told me that it wasnt my time.


commentCommented on: Tue Apr 20, 2010 @ 04:18am
cool! i like!



xT_Nightmare_Tx
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