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The life and times of a masochistic madman.
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Poem: Not so sweet


I have no idea what I was thinking when I wrote this, I had the song Sweet Amber by Metallica stuck in my head so I guess that could be the reason.

I wanted to write a poem about how people hide their emotions, this is how it ended up. hope you guys like it:



A girl that lives a lie
She hides in her innocence
She lives like everyone else
her life seems so pure
So right
So sweet

Her life seems normal
Everyone surrounds hers
They throw themselves at her feet
She seems to love the people
She seems happy
It seems to good to be true

Her true face is hidden by lies
Lies of innocence
Lies of happiness
She shows what she wants you to see
She can't face herself
She will try to act happy
But it's not enough to her
She feels alone
She feels unloved

Her heart breaks inside
She hides in her fears
She wants to be free
Free of the pain
Free of the torment
She lives in a world of lies
She lives with her broken innocence
But she never shows her true self
The world would never understand
So she puts on the fake happiness
And lives through her pain
She is no longer innocent
She will be alone






User Comments: [4]
Minazuki_Sy
Community Member





Wed Dec 30, 2009 @ 03:47am


so what will you do then , protect her from danger ^^ heart


SA1NT4NG3R
Community Member





Wed Dec 30, 2009 @ 02:42pm


you can't protect her because she seems to be fine, but she is hiding her emotions from everyone else and pretending to be happy.


An Endless Amethyst Snow
Community Member





Sat Jan 09, 2010 @ 01:49am


Ya gotta write about me dont cha?
This is mt true self tooo
lol
im famous
so ur writing about me
yay!
sweet



"The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love someone else."

-Amethyst Snow

DarkMindedChik
Community Member





Fri Feb 19, 2010 @ 08:06pm


Ur deep n write the truth most of us live throught our lives wth a fake face n fake happyness i dare say that i was like that too but now i just dont care i will say wat i mean n act how i want n be truthfull to evryone around me n myself ^^
but im curiouse how do u know those things? is it a girl u know?


User Comments: [4]
 
 
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