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The physical space involved in a steampunk equivalent machine (a machine that you create to replace technology in use today: A computer, for example.) far exceeds (in both weight, size, and density) the requirements for current technology’s usage.
There is an expected stylistic flair to steampunk. A way of doing business, costume requirements, customs and courtesies, etc. Do your research on the Victorian era.
The buzz and hum of white noise in our time is replaced by the whirr and clicks of white noise in steampunk. Involve all the senses. The smell of grease and steam, the tick of gears, the way food tastes…
Technology is only as important as the scene in which it is broken. Hear me out. If I’m on a solar sailor powered by the ether of space a la Treasure Planet, mentioning the solar sails is a side bar, a relatively unnoticed thing. Unless it breaks…at that point your replacement/repair is necessary and it somehow affects your character interaction.
Ultimately your world is a backdrop, the stage on which the players play. If you don’t have a character arc, a growth and change of/for your character, readers won’t care how much time you’ve put into your research. They will put your book down and walk away.