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Angel's Scriptures
This is for me to write anything I want in. I'm going to post some writing I have done and write in more when I feel like it. You don't have to read it, but you might find something of intrest. Just one thing: DON'T STEAL!
Angelic Hell
The life lived by an angel upon this earth is one of saddness and despair. My life is the hell of one such angel, I am not worthy, but still he stays, my angel, to watch over me. I don't desevre it, I don't deserve any of it, he's...an angel, my angel, but he deserves someone better than me, I have nothing to give but my love. And it seems that's enough. I'm not special, not pretty, not particularly nice or interesting, but still he stays by my side, forever. I can't imagine the pain it must cause him, to live with such a...mortal, for that is all I am, an ordinary little, weak, puny human. And he, the angel of my dreams, the immortal, the watcher, the leader, who will one day lead me out of this earthly hellhole and onto the heavans above. He will cure my pain. Because he stays, he must love me, but how could he, I am nothing...nothing...

Nothing to do with me. But I'm almost depressed at the moment...just some crap my brain spewed out in my misery...






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lil_lady_em
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commentCommented on: Sun Jan 02, 2005 @ 11:47am
i likes this alot. the repetitiveness gives it a desperation asthough you just keep repeating these thoughts in your head. you question your worth and the way the piece is written it can portray the "angel" as anything that the reader can relate to. as not everyone could relate to a friend sticking by them or a family member sticking by them etc. it is an angel, a figure of hope among the worthlessness of their lives. i think that portraying it as an angel brings hope to the situation even though it seems hopeless.
where you say this is just crap i find very interesting. as you put yourself down on while you still have your angel (in this case a gift to write) looking out for you.
hope ya like me review...luv ems heart heart heart


commentCommented on: Mon Jan 03, 2005 @ 08:22pm
heh. thanks em.
i wasn't even trying. writing makes me feel better. sweatdrop



Dante Kidrouk
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