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Well, I have creative writing class, so I figured that I'd be able to post some stuff upon here for you to wittness my crappy stuff for all its worth. Here are 2 poems for this such class:

Window Pane

Ethereal raindrops slide down evening glass -

Frame chilling to fingertips touch;

For the blanket of clouds in the heavens overcast;

Dark wings cloak, in woven icy beeze;

With trees bending - sacrificing leaves;

All for a ride on invisible dreams, a dying prayer.

And with each passing hour does pass;

Ever at the window pane; their boughs againts glass;

Tap; scratch; whistle; howl as night unveils.

The ever wind's requiem, hanting my wake:

Stay here.



Here's the next one:


Ares

Echoing ballad, lamenting with chant -

Horizon woven with crimson lace of sunset,

Casting tinge, chromatic blood.

Blade kissing blade, etched with destruction,

Seething ambition, acidic, animosity.

Ethereal voices reach out within battle undying will, ardor!

The role play as begun to commence;

Battle to win?

We must.



So yeah, my pathetic poems. Enjoy them for all their horrible worth. Who knows, you may like 'em (though I don't know why you would). Still, I wanted to post something before I went away to North Carolina. So, night to all!!! Next you hear from me; I'll be down south in the Carolina's!

HAPPY THANKSGIVING!!! (For those in the US)

Lilithia, you rock. Soar* is awsome, everyone should read it. She posts good poems too, so to show off some of mine as well I posted some too! Thanks lil!

edit: STUPID THINGS!!! For the first poem, it will not allow me to post it the way I want to so you'll see each line like it hasn't been indented. *sigh*

Ja ne.