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when i first met you
your smile blinded me it was
like like what was it like
i cant explain it, your smile was
something i couldn't explain and it was mysterious
though it was beautiful its summer we
are parted and i miss you so much
its a feeling i cant explain i just miss you
everything about you is perfect your smile, personality, and your feedbacks
though sometimes i wish you could return the same feelings i wont
be a bother i miss you and i hope you know that cuz its
straight from the heart if you know who you are
please tell me you love me ~ ♥ WyOnA

Find no hope in nothing new and I never had a dream come true
Lies and hate and agony; through my eyes that's all I see ~ wYoNa

OH THIS IS SOMETHING THAT MY FRND LISA MADE I DONT FEEL BAD FOR HER SORRY!!! BUT THIS IS A DIFFERENT WAY I WOULD PUT IT!!

wat lisa wrote:
If u think u r the person im talking about read this:
I luv u but u dont like me. but u have a gf that likes u too
when she touches u and talks to u u will fine me jealous
it's ok whether my heart breaks or maybe broken but no matter how nice i become u still wouldnt like me. how come idk
to everyone who talks to u ,u tell them secrets but not me do u know how i feel i hope no.

wat i wouldve wrote:
if you think you are the person im talking about please read this:
i love you but you dont't love me back. and you have a girlfriend that likes you back
when she touches and talks to you, you may find me envy
it's okay whether my heart breaks or maybe broken, but no matter how nice i become you still wouldn't like me. why is that? i dont know but i would like to know
everyone who talks to you, theres always a whisper of secrets but why not to me
do you know how i feel i hope you do!

why i changed it:
in the first sentence she wrote i love you so she should put but you dont love me back instead of "but you don't like me" otherwise change it to "i like you"
and then in the second sentence its not right to put gf if you really mean it spell things out and take the time of your life to actually not be lazy and just write girlfriend out! and lisa dont put when she talks to you and touches you (other way around) you should just pout when she touches AND talks to you, and you shouldn't just use simple words like jealous you should use another related word like envy and the next sentence nothing wrong you, but you shouldnt put idk!! just leave it at "you still wouldnt like me"
"everyone who talks to you, you tell them secrets but not to me do you know how i feel i hope no (if you actually want the persons feelings in return he should know how you feel about him DUH!!!!) and i changed that sentence cuz it sounds so boring how could anyone think that was a sad poem or watever it is i like my sentence
"theres always a whisper of secrets" and i put "do you know how i feel? i hope you do" ONCE AGAIN HE SHOULD KNOW HOW YOU FEEL think about it thats kinda dumb

and to all the haters who think that i suck go suck a d**k okay!!!!