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I started writing a story today :O!!!!!!!! It was a dream kind of? Yea it was. Anyways! Don't ask about the name. xD It was actually like that in my dream. Anyways!! COMMENT FOR FEEDBACK!! I honestly don't care if you say it's horrible. Feel free to say so.
The notes I pressed rand through the room, calming the mood. I sat close by the door of the balcony, playing the harmonious piano softly. I glanced outside of the beautiful scenery to get a quick glimpse of the ocean, whose waves hit the shore and made a soft sound that goes through the whole small town. I sighed and started playing again.
Soon enough, I got lost in the music and started singing. So lost that I didn’t hear the balcony door open. I sure did feel someone walk in though. I wasn’t startled, but I slowly turned to see who it was.
As soon as I looked at him, someone about my age stood there, startled. He had really soft looking brown hair and deep blue eyes, like the ocean. His face had a sweet look to it, sort of innocent. He was wearing a brown shirt with some kind of design on it and torn dark blue jeans.
“Hi,” I said, in a sort of confused tone.
“Hey…” he said in a very gentle voice. I stood up infront of him. I smiled sweetly and put my hand out for a hand shake.
He shook my hand. His hand had that strong feel to it, but it was soft, gentle, and very warm.
“What’s your name?” I asked.
“Oh, um… I go by the name Muffin,” he said. I giggled softly.
“Well then, nice to meet you,” I said. “I’m Rebeca,”
He chuckled. “Nice name, but sorry, Rebeca, I have to get going,” He said, starting to head out the door. Then he stopped. “Er, don’t tell anyone you saw me. It’s a secret, okay?” I nodded and made a confused face. “Bye!” he said as he ran outside and down the stairs of the balcony.
I followed out a few seconds after but he was long gone. I sighed. I looked out to the ocean and noticed the sunset. The colors looked amazing, but decided I should probably go lay down inside at this time.
I closed the door after I walked back inside, being sure not to lock it. I don’t know why but I had a feeling I shouldn’t lock it.
I walked to my room. The ocean feel in my room was defiently calming. I sighed and plopped on my bed, staring at the plain ceiling. I drifted off to sleep a few minutes later.
Well what do you think? FEED BACKK. Again, feel free to hate it in comments or whatever. Your opinion is all I need. Don't really need people trying to be nice razz xD
 InsaneOctopus · Sat Jun 06, 2009 @ 12:31am · 7 Comments |
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