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Listen to my mouth conjugate my feelings, big words convey my thoughts but I think the meaning is missing. When did my flow become imprisoned in this mindless spit that's dripping, why do I feel like a heartbreak away from putting a gun to my head and writing a ending? Looking at the world through 20/20 vision and all I see is heartless people working on there own ambitions, to many times have I seen life's problems summed up in a bible scripture. Do we decide our life, our has life been pre-written, I witness the world in pain and wonder if I can make a difference. Joy to the world replaced by corporate business, now all we have left is commercials on the television.





illegal infamy
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    Shanti-Suchi
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    commentCommented on: Thu Jan 22, 2009 @ 03:39am
    I like the train of thought in this. I don't know if it's more spoken word or something else but it's cool. It had a concept, a meaning, a goal, and I like how you ended it sweet and simple. But profound.


    commentCommented on: Thu Jan 22, 2009 @ 03:44am
    Honestly, I just hear a beat and it flows through my mind, I do not write these, they are all thought of and remembered in my mind. Whenever I feel something needs to be said is when I write these things down for other people to see them. I do not write often, but when I do, I make art. Quality over Quantity.



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