November o7, 2oo8.
"Tickling my heart with excitement
Humoring my with memories
Evil thoughts fill my head
Rage fills my body
Air cant go into my lungs
Veins visible through my skin
Ebony sky visible through my window
Never again shall i see the next day"
My friend made that poem just a few minutes ago and when I read it, I wanted to revise it. @___@
Here is the poem that I revised:
"Tired eyes blinked through the light,
Hastily, laughing at me,
Enmity seeps into my dreadful head,
Rage seethes through my pained body,
Air lost within me...
Veins wriggled its way free,
Ebony sky clouds upon my shattered window,
Nonetheless... no day shall ever approach again..."
-Squeals- I don't know why I'm so happy. LOL. The underlined letters spell out "THE RAVEN." x3 It's the poem by Edgar Allan Poe. :3 Yes, the crazy man who writes really good poems. LOL.
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