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frozen
cold as my heart gets ill always be warm.
with thoughts of you filling my dreams.
its no wonder im happy almost all the time.
you can make me laugh, just dont make me cry.
theres feeling inside, so much feeling i hide.
i hide it from the world, the outside we all see.
its a world i hide from, except in my dreams.
its easy enough to see who i am....just not who i can truely be.
you see an outsider, not totally me.
this person you see...the one whos talking.
the person inside me.
is not really me.
its a person inside me thats a personality of mine.
its a segment of me.
not who i can truely be.
theres one thats not kind
one thats too kind
one that worries
the one that leaves people in awe
then theres the one....or two i should say.....
ones a romantic,
the others more...dark,
youll walk down the street and pass me on by,
youll see a dim person...unlike where im from.
youll see someone who looks away from this world.
thats not truely me...thats just one personality of many.
now can you see?
am i truely me? or am i someone you just know?
someone from the inside depths of your mind.
i know im here, i think i know why...
do you have any idea whats instore for the world?

please comment on this. i really wanna know if people like it or not. just give your opinion please.






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666 Dark-X 666
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commentCommented on: Sat Oct 01, 2005 @ 07:17am
it good better what i can do


commentCommented on: Thu Oct 06, 2005 @ 08:37pm
Woah thats good



Private_Sheldon
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hshaver13
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commentCommented on: Fri Oct 07, 2005 @ 01:47am
glad you guys like it. i was in a weird mood when i wrote it and i know it felt really good so ive been writing a lot of stuff like that. let me know if you want to read it. i dont think im going to post it here.


commentCommented on: Fri Oct 07, 2005 @ 02:54pm
you should try those little coffe shops...they some times have like poet knight and when you dget on stage an do your thing the snap for you....they some times ghet very good poets in there....i've only been a few times....but the poems really make you think though...



ifrit13
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hshaver13
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commentCommented on: Sat Oct 08, 2005 @ 04:18am
ive never been to one of those places. i dont think we have any here. wish i could find one....that would be really nice. if anyone i knew heard me read like that though they might think it ironic.


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