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In this Journal you will find alot of poems I wrote myself along with some other projects im working on....(I would very much so appreciate your comments or thoughts...I love hearing(reading) what you guys think of this stuff. :)
Dying Hopes...
Dying Hopes (Written by:The Black Angel of Chaosx)

I hear you give it all away
and my efforts not getting in the way.

Hoping and knowing you can do better than this.

Wondering should I give up and quit?
Knowing satisfactory thoughts won't come from this


So I follow you, lusting for your presence
Somewhere I belong, a feeling of remembrance

Once together maybe I can be there for you
but until that moment, I swear my mind won't ignore you.






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Waiting Porcelain
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commentCommented on: Thu Oct 09, 2008 @ 06:03am
[a couple typos..but]

I like it, as always. =]

I always want to know what goes on in your head...


commentCommented on: Thu Oct 09, 2008 @ 06:21am
xp I knew I should have re-read before I posted...-__-"

Oh well....anyway glad you liked it Stef XD heart

(Now let's fix those errors)



The Black Angel of Chaosx
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Kirei Kunoichi07
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commentCommented on: Fri Oct 10, 2008 @ 06:17pm
Its good.


commentCommented on: Sat Oct 11, 2008 @ 06:09am
Thanks....^ ^!!!

Means alot!!!



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