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Rewrite. A rewrite of Twilight I wrote. ~Part 2~
~Last time~
He lifted me up into his arms. He said “You are the most beautiful woman in the world.” He started to hum my lullaby as I blushed. I said, “I love you Edward” as I drifted of to sleep.

2.Shock

BPOV

I woke up to Edward smiling at me, his normal crocked grin, than I remembered last night he proposed to me!!! I started to hyperventilate and Edward asked “ Bella, are you ok?!” he looked worried even tho it was a normal thing I did. The only answer came into my head, “Yes, I just went into shock from when you asked me to marry you.” I mean it was perfectly true. He gave me a harsh look as I asked “What’s wrong?” He said “Nothing, I’m just really happy.” “Oh, I’m really happy to, you know how I am, Stuff sinks in late.” I said with a smile, but underneath I felt there was something wrong, he was acting strange.

EPOV

I couldn’t tell her about the surprise for her, But the look in her eyes just said tell me what’s up. I mean I hate lying to her, but I promised Alice that it would be a surprise for her, so that meant that I couldn’t tell her. Alice would probably know if I tell Bella, and Alice gets really mad and I don’t want that.

APOV

I had a vison. Damn u Edward, he’s going to let it slip, I got to get in there room before he tells her!!

BPOV

Edward still had a harsh look on his face. It looked like he was trying to withstanding himself! Than Alice bursted into the room. Edward yelled “What the hell Alice!!” Alice said “I have to talk to you Edward...NOW!!!” She sounded really pist off , maybe whatever Edward did is what he’s keeping from me.

EPOV

Crap!! Alice must have had a vison of me telling Bella, because she’s really pist. I kindly kissed Bella before I stepped outside...

~PLZ COMMENT!!! HOPEFULLY THIS IS LONGER 4 UZE.~





 
 
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