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Poems and ABout life
i write poems here and this bout my life some are in Tagalog so if u cant read Try translated it
Ok today i got a New Poem i wrote. if u didnt know i write poems when i am bored so ya and i draw so Read and enjoy .Hey everyone i am good and If u want go to my Profile and comment and rate it 1-10 ok and tell me wat i should add ok here the poem:

The fog lifted and a vision appeared
A vision of beauty that I so revered
Her voice so soft I barely heard a sound
But the words she spoke were so profound

Her scent fills my senses like clean fresh air
The look in her eye, the touch of her hair
Her laughter is like wind chimes in the breeze
A Light gentle sound that does appease

A diamond she is among the many stones
I could spend hours with her on the phone
Her love is passion a storm in the night
Because I adore her this poem I write

Butterflies gather round jealous at the sight
Of this beauty the sun shines on so bright
I give her my heart it's here in my hand
In hopes that she takes it and understands

I'm not a player in spite of what I've done
But the things I did will never be undone
I'll love you forever and promise I will
Your every dream I hope to fulfill






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XxKeyboardCatxX
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commentCommented on: Sun Aug 03, 2008 @ 02:58am
Nice poem XD rock on biggrin xd


commentCommented on: Tue Aug 12, 2008 @ 04:44am
ITS AN AMAZING POEM! 10 BILLION! Thats what i rate it, but who is this about?



0fallen-snow-angel0
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Sexy_Mexican_Chica96
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commentCommented on: Thu Sep 11, 2008 @ 01:10am
Its about becca aint it it shows u had no feelings for thanks at least now i have no hopes for u to break


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