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[:I love writing poems:]
WAR VICTIMS

With blood-smeared face
I gaze into the sea.
Waves of sadness
Rinse the wreckages of war.
DESTROYED.

Parentless children are standing
amids battlegrounds.
They are lost.
They are imperiled.

Searching for deliverance from loneliness.
Finding death,
By a bomb impact.
They are obliterated...

With blood-smeared face
I gaze into battlegrounds.
War victims everywhere.
Children cries for their parents.
KILLED.






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Camui_Erienne
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commentCommented on: Sat Jul 19, 2008 @ 10:48pm
This is the poem KRIEGSOPFER translated into English. I hope you understand it... because I think I've use the wrong expressions in some cases. If you know a better translations for some words, compare this one to the German poem and then tell me. I will change it in my poem. But just if you explain why I should change the vocabulary, mkay? MKAY.

ENJOY ^-^


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