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Dreamworld Song (This is rather random, to say the least, but imagine it as an early Oasis song and goes real smooth like.) I wish I was living in a dream world. Where skies are gray, and we can play all day. Where the days are night, and the stars shine bright. The moon would look down on me and you, then my gray skies would turn bright blue. Because we'd be living in a dreamworld. We'd hike the mountains and dance the sky. Back down to the earth, we would fly. Drink from the rivers and swim in the sea. Dream about it, just you and me. I wish I was living in a dreamworld. Tell me what would you do, if you could do what you wanted to. Would you dream of me standing next to you? Tell me it'd be your dream come true. The skies would cry a rain of joy, Dancing in a rain that we could enjoy. Because we'd be living in dreamworld. There it'd be just you and me. In our own little world where we could be free. Free to love, free to fly. Fly away as time flies by. I wish I was living in a dreamworld. I'd never wake from this dream. You and I, we're the team. You and I, me and you. That's all we'll need is just us two. Living in a dream world. Where the skies are gray, and we could play all day. Living in a dream world. Where the days are night, and the stars shine bright. Living in a dream world. The moon would look down on me and you, then my gray skies would turn bright blue. If we lived in a dream world. It's just be us two. Living in our dream world. Just me and you.

Posted by: Amedeous Thu Jul 17, 2008 @ 08:44pm

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I feel like
I'm never complete.
When I peel away
these pieces of me.
Pieces to a puzzle,
the puzzle that was me.
A puzzle that will
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My Stories, Prose and Songs[/i:4a82ba2589][/align:4a82ba2589]

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Commented on: Thu Jul 17, 2008 @ 08:59pm


	Oooh, I like it. I can see it as a song. ^_^ The lyrics flow really well. One random typo: "dance the sky."

Commented on: Thu Jul 17, 2008 @ 09:04pm


	I don't see the typo, unless you're pointing out the way I wrote it. If that's the case, it's just the randomness part of the song.

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Commented on: Sun Jul 20, 2008 @ 07:31am


	wow man, that was amazing. :]

Commented on: Mon Jul 21, 2008 @ 04:52am


	I dont know what early oasis is like but i rather like the lyrics sounds like something that i would listen to on repeat as im falling asleep

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Commented on: Mon Jul 21, 2008 @ 04:54am


	I like it. It feels... peaceful. :]] The skies are grey part reminded me of "You Are My Sunshine". Keep going, this is really good. ^-^

Commented on: Mon Jul 21, 2008 @ 05:50am


	This reminds me of a lot of the dreams I used to have. My dreams used to be my refuge from stress and stuff like that. Key phrase: used to be. I really really really like this, though! smile By the way, did you actually have someone else in mind for this? Because for some reason when I write stuff like this, and believe me I write a lot of stuff like this, I usually have no particular person in mind. I just kind of write..... I like boys!

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Commented on: Mon Jul 21, 2008 @ 05:52am


	Actually. I didn't have anyone in mind for this one, as odd as it sounds. I was chatting with a friend of mind. The second she said 'I'm off to sleep. Gonna visit that dreamworld of mine' it just all fell together. Took me about 3 minutes to write it.

Commented on: Sun Oct 19, 2008 @ 06:39pm


	Sounds like a perfect life to live, a dream world indeed.

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