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defeated
june

weekend fling,
a loveless endevour.
promise of truth,
the trick was so clever.

lured into the trap,
fell down the rabbit's hole.
the string pulled, the box fell,
trapping my heart and soul.

my angel and guardian,
my life's love and savior.
trust once lost,
had found someone to favor.

broken and defeated,
wounds slashed open and bleeding.
heart open and exposed,
pulled out while still beating.

patch it with ducktape,
stitch it with wires.
restart with jumpers,
repair it with pliers.

mechanical heart,
broken apart,
left lonely and dying,
lifetimes of crying,
waiting and hoping someone buys thease leases,
rent out my heart in it's thousand pieces.






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blood_lusting_fangs
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commentCommented on: Fri Jul 04, 2008 @ 04:16am
you write very beautifully and yet so deep and this one specifically sad. you really have talent to take it further because if you can move someone to tears with words alone then you know you are really talented heart


commentCommented on: Fri Jul 04, 2008 @ 05:18am
your writting is great. it speaks to me. it really does.



Simply Snuffles
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