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[:I love writing poems:]
Veränderung


Damals in meiner

renovierungsbedürftigen Kindheit

hatte ich noch

ausbaufähige Träume.


Heute in meinem

vollautomatisiertem Leben

gibt es nur noch eine

leistungsorientierte Hoffnung.


Das ist mein VERÄNDERTES LEBEN.






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Camui_Erienne
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commentCommented on: Sat Jun 21, 2008 @ 02:54pm
This one was made in Friday's German class. We had to write a poem with metaphoric words we created ^-^
Hope you like it 3nodding


commentCommented on: Sun Jul 20, 2008 @ 03:41am
Variation

At that time in my

renovation needy childhoods

I still had

Extension capable dreams.

Today in my

vollautomatisiertem life

it gives only one

Performance-related hope.

That is my CHANGED LIFE.



CaptainKiran
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Camui_Erienne
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commentCommented on: Sun Jul 20, 2008 @ 03:31pm
wow, you've translated my poem! Very cool ^o^

THANK YOU SO MUCH *huggles*


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