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KRIEGSOPFER

Mit blutverschmiertem Gesicht
Starre ich aufs Meer hinaus.
Wellen der Traurigkeit
Umspülen Ruinen des Krieges.
ZERSTÖRT.

Elternlose Kinder stehen
Inmitten von Schlachtfeldern.
Sie sind verloren.
Sind Bösem ausgesetzt.

Suchen nach Erlösung von Einsamkeit.
Finden Tod,
Durch Bombeneinschlag.
Sind ausgelöscht...

Mit blutverschmiertem Gesicht
Starre ich auf Schlachtfelder.
Überall Kriegsopfer.
Kinder weinen um ihre Eltern.
GETÖTET.






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Camui_Erienne
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commentCommented on: Sat Jun 21, 2008 @ 02:57pm
This one was a homework for German classes. We had to write a poem to a certain topic. My topic was WAR. So I did this one ^-^

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commentCommented on: Sun Jul 20, 2008 @ 03:44am
THIS is the transelation i got from it.

War victim

With blood smeared face, I stare on the sea out. Waves of the sadness would play around ruins of the war.
DESTROYS.

Parentless children stand in the middle of of battlefields. They are lost. Are evil stopped.

Search for redemption of loneliness. Find death, through bomb impact. Are extinguished...

With blood smeared face, I stare on battlefield. Everywhere war victim. Children cry around its parents. KILLED.


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CaptainKiran
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Camui_Erienne
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commentCommented on: Sun Jul 20, 2008 @ 03:38pm
This translation is quite ok, but in some cases there are some grasp-problems.
The content changes then a bit.


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