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The world is a evil place. Humans do not belong. Somethings isn't worth living for but there is still somthing good. Humans in my eyes are what is detroying everything beautiful. But the most sad thing of all is that I am one of them. Humans want to change but cannot. If they don't change now then humans may all say good bye. Humans is destroying themselves. It is a new beginging and a new end for them all.

I am cold. But I am someone on the inside. No one knows me but there is time for someone to finally open me up and look inside me and truly see who I am. But for now they will be looking at my shell without its soul. But where is the soul? Who will find it and finally uncover it?

Posted by: xxxTwilightknightxxx Wed Apr 30, 2008 @ 10:28pm

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xxxTwilightknightxxx
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Commented on: Wed Apr 30, 2008 @ 10:33pm


	any1 like my poems and dont take this serious also there will b more of my poems will b posted

Commented on: Wed Apr 30, 2008 @ 11:19pm


	wow, r u gonna b a poet or something when u grow up? thats kinda how i feel sometimes 2...

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Commented on: Thu May 01, 2008 @ 01:30am


	well i dk really no yet wat about u do u want to b friends?

Commented on: Fri May 02, 2008 @ 01:34am


	thats neat i haven't posted any of my work yet but i'll get to it soon so you can read some of my stuff ^___^

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Commented on: Fri May 02, 2008 @ 01:37am


	do u think its alittle sad?

Commented on: Tue May 06, 2008 @ 08:20pm


	^__^ I think your story is very good. Doesnt quite seem like a poem, but still its very nice. There are a few grammatical errors but thats really all I can see. Good job and good luck!

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Commented on: Thu May 08, 2008 @ 11:34pm


	thx and i dont c any grammer erro and these 2 poems do not ryme but they still r poems

Commented on: Mon May 12, 2008 @ 01:07am


	hey schoolgrl! biggrin ur poem is really good but its also sad... crying keep up the good work! 3nodding

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Commented on: Sat Jun 07, 2008 @ 07:32pm


	dat is cool azome eek

Commented on: Wed Jun 18, 2008 @ 01:36am


	Even if u arent serious i think like this a lot. i feel the same way. wen i read this i felt like i was the 1 who wrote it cause i've said similar things in my mind not alwayz tho. weird huh? it doesnt seem like me at all does it?

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