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The Blessing of Destruction(Losing Hope...) The Blessing of Destruction(Losing Hope...) (Written By:The Black Angel of Chaosx) I'm not gay I'm very depressed My life is a mess Why is it always filled with stress? Maybe one day I will shutdown for the best End this life and take away the stress But that will leave my loved ones in a bigger mess Why does this tension never rest? Im not sure but I guess this knife on my arms will make all my pain finally be gone...

Posted by: The Black Angel of Chaosx Sat Apr 19, 2008 @ 07:07pm

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Commented on: Sat Apr 19, 2008 @ 07:10pm


	Hey everyone...KajutoMasterX here again and heres my latest poem smile . Also sorry to everyone who thought I was done writing sad depressing stuff...I try but unless im thinking of my gf or God it doesnt seem to happen...anyway hope you all like xd Be Critical and point out what you think should be changed or diffrent!!!! Plz Comment!!!! They help me make better poems!!!!

Commented on: Sat Apr 19, 2008 @ 08:31pm


	Also im not fully satisfied with this poem so I may make a remake in the future when I get time.... ninja

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Commented on: Sat Apr 19, 2008 @ 08:44pm


	Depression is so hard to take... I'd hug you if you were here...

Commented on: Sat Apr 19, 2008 @ 08:54pm


	yah.. i'd hug you too if i could.. sad and it's still pretty good, i'm not much of a critic, but if you do ever make a remake can't wait to see it ^-^ luv yah~ and.. glad i make you happy blaugh umm.. sorry if that interrupts.. your.. depressing.. uhh feelings and thoughts into poetry.. sweatdrop

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Commented on: Sat Apr 19, 2008 @ 09:50pm


	Its good but some things could be changed to make it flow better . I'm not trying to change ur poem around or anything this is what you can do to make it sound better smile ______________________________________________________________________ Ok I changed it in blue...idk if this will help or anything I'm not gay I'm not insane I'm just... immensely depressed My life is a mess Why is it always full of stress? Maybe one day I will shutdown for the best End this life and take away all of this stress But that will leave my loved ones in a massive mess Why does this tension never rest? I wish it would all just go away And take away this burden on my life I wish I could have at least one joyful day Before I throw my life into a knife Why won't it just leave me alone to live a life with no pain,no sorrow, just happiness? Im not sure why but I guess this knife will make all of this pain and sorrow finally be gone And for once i can finally be able to rest in peace... ___________________________________________________________________________ well, how does it sound now? DEPRESSION SUCKS! sad

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