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In this Journal you will find alot of poems I wrote myself along with some other projects im working on....(I would very much so appreciate your comments or thoughts...I love hearing(reading) what you guys think of this stuff. :)
The Inner Mask
The Inner Mask (Written by: The Black Angel of Chaosx)

Some times I just want to die
Just the thought of it makes me want to cry

Just knowing that you can't depend on me when you need me most makes my heart bled inside

I'm sorry everyone for these lies
I love you but im dying inside

I am not your personal Jesus nor anyone you want to meet

Forget me now and save your heart greif...






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The Black Angel of Chaosx
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commentCommented on: Sun Mar 23, 2008 @ 07:20pm
Hello everyone who read this poem....Please comment here!!!!! PLZ!!!!

Also be critical on your comments....I need to see what people really think about this... neutral


commentCommented on: Sun Mar 23, 2008 @ 07:40pm
sad You write good poetry that haz meaning...and.... sum peepul can rel8 2 it. smile



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The Black Angel of Chaosx
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commentCommented on: Sun Mar 23, 2008 @ 07:53pm
Why thank you Larisa. I value all of your thoughts. They help me make better poems. ^ ^


commentCommented on: Sun Mar 23, 2008 @ 08:38pm
yah agreed XP
alot of people can relate to it when they read poems like these, and i love the fact you can just express yourself the way you do, and you keep saying it dark or depressing or something but that's the one thing that can bring out a poem and make your readers become emotionally attacted, that's what poems are all about, emotions. ^-^
great work blaugh



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commentCommented on: Sun Mar 23, 2008 @ 09:31pm
Thanks V... and like I said earllier I would give u a hug for commenting here...*hugs* heart

Also please comment more here!!!!


commentCommented on: Sun Mar 23, 2008 @ 10:44pm
Really cool Honestly ^_^ and its really an understandable poem good job *thumbs up*



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commentCommented on: Sun Mar 23, 2008 @ 11:01pm
Is this how you really feel inside KMX-san? You're a really wonderful person, you have meaning, otherwise you would have never been born. *gives you a friendly hug* I think you're really nice. ^-^ And no matter what you do, you'll never change my opinion. ^_^ I don't care if you murdered someone! I still think you have good qualities. It's good that you can show your inner thoughts through poems like this. You have a gift see? smile


commentCommented on: Mon Mar 24, 2008 @ 03:09am
Thanks Gaarakamishi for you comment(and for calling me KMX wink )

I really appeciate it..^ ^



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commentCommented on: Thu Mar 27, 2008 @ 12:17am
Wonderful. 3nodding


commentCommented on: Sat Mar 29, 2008 @ 02:37am
Thank You...



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