I picked Goldielocks and the Three Bears. Now, with this story, we had to make our own modernized version of it. He let us have a partner to do this with, and my partner gave me most of the ideas for this story. Thanks Angel. I also want to thank all of my supporters, I wouldn't have put this here without you saying so. You know who you are. All of these 'pages', I wrote before on pieces of paper and it filled up the entire paper. So, here it is, the first page of Gold-E-Locks.
Gold-E-Locks
There was a little girl who walked into the woods alone because she had an alcholic mother who abused her. She ran away from home because of her problems and felt she would be better off alone.
This girls name was Gold-E-Locks. She didn't prepare for the runaway trip so all she had were the clothes on her back. Her dress was gold and made her hair match. Her skin was porcelain which contrasted the darkness around her.
She didn't know where she was going, she just wanted to walk to get away from the troubles of her life but the dark woods were eerie and she started to feel nervous until she came upon a log cabin out in the middle of nowhere. The log cabin was as big as a small house, the ones you see in little kids stories. Gold-E-Locks was an only child since her father abandoned her mother the day after her fifth birthday. She guessed she was like him now, running away from her family. She remembered his face but nothing more, not what he did or how he smiled. Just his always blank expression on his face. That's the way she always remembered him.
She walked up to the cabin window, there were two on either side of the door, and looked inside. She wasn't surprised by what she found, this place was really nowhereland. Why would somebody build something like this way out here?
The log cabin was empty, empty of everything except for the wooden floorboards which was carpeted by dust. She looked around but out of common sense, knew nobody would tell her anything if she just walked in. So, she did.
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