Ok so in Creative writing we're still on our poetry unit and haven't gootten on to short stories and prose which is all good I guess. But it's driving me nuts that. I'm getting full credit on this poems that I feel like I'm completly BSing on. I don't know I feel like I don't deserve the grade since it feels like every poem I write is completly bull s**t, and crap. Either it's too simple like a hallmark card or just terrible. On the other and I might be a little too hard on myself. I think I might put some of those poems up and if you read my journal feel free to comment and critise mywork. Honestly I don't care if you rip it up and tell me it's crap, but the cathc is if you do that tell me how to make it better. Oh and if you're the type that reads a poem, smiles and nodds "Oh that's just peachy." don't even bother commenting then. Becuase most times that means that either A you don't care or B it truely is crap and you just don't feel like typing up the criticism...
RAWR!
Random lyrics. "And I'm thinking about what Sarah said. "Love is watching someonedie.' So who'se gonna watch you die." ~ Death Cab for Cutie, What Sarah said.
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