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hey i wrote a poem tell me what you think if u please.
Take away the pain thats been forming in my brain
pouring down like twilight rain
I see my life winding down the drain
hoping nobody hears the hint of strain in my voice
feeling the weight and fearing the pain
crashing down refusing to show
I wont let them know
as my strength begins to grow
keeping the fear down below
I wonder if they know
I've got my arrow and my bow
destined to stop the resounding crow
readying my self for the impending blow of the next usual pain
still feeling the pain that already came
Thinking I have only myself to blame
Even then I'm not the same
so I sit here in this twilight rain
feeling pain
in my voice a hint of strain
everything else is just ordained
My cheeks are stained with red
My bleeding eyes to blame
everyone else looks the same
I start to wish you never came
But hoping you don't feel the same
I see the picture frame by frame wondering if it would be the same
If I had never been here to blame
pain after pain its all the same
I am not just some random Dame
clinging to fame
instead I Shy away from fame
wishing i had never came
can you take away the pain thats been forming in my brain
As I let the twilight rain attempt to dround all of my pain
so what do you think is it good sweatdrop comment fill me in.PLEAAASSSEEEE! whee Ill give you a cookie and a jolly rancher promise! cool
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