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Contest Entry: The Doll
THE DOLL



It sat there every day and night
Her eyes so dark and skin so light
Forever glaring as she would
I ignored her the best I could
I left her be and passed on by
But the doll had somehow caught my eye
The porcelain body appeared to be strong
Yet she'd been here for a while too long
I wondered if she would ever break
So I could give her shards to the lake
She couldn't stay another day
I had just wanted her to go away
I felt that death was at my door
A feeling that I could not ignore
I couldn't touch her
That, I was sure
So my savior, my cousin, came to town
And dropped the doll to the ground
I swear I saw a shadow rise
From where the broken body lies






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Zyv Dreya
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commentCommented on: Sat Nov 10, 2007 @ 02:49am
now THIS is a fine piece of poetry.

cheers to you!


commentCommented on: Sun Nov 11, 2007 @ 08:54pm
Eeps... Thankies!



Dasana
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