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Even though that poem was really good, it is also really sad.

The Wall

There is a wall the surrounds everyone
It is usually broken down when that person has a friend
But for others, the wall is built up from the pain that they have
The wall is strong
Growing stronger from your sadness
The wall is biult of the things that keep you away from life
Away from the place that you need to be
Break down that wall
And soar out of the boarders
Into the sun
To the warmth of freedom

Sorry that it isn't good, but I think taht it gets my feelings out, well, at least the ones that i had.

im looking at myself in th mirror right now and i see... burning_eyes

Time will break us down to our lowest points, and will define it with every detail and haunt us with it. Forcing ourself to plumit deeper into our own despair, the doings of our own actions. Young and ready to take on the word, with no where to start.
You were short and to the point, it was nice. Putting the full emphasis on what was needed, and let out all the emotion felt. It was nice.
-Luna

...some people can only right poems when their emotion is really strong....i like his poems....

i think this one is good of coarse...

i am always here for you to talk to