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who needs a headline with the poems I write
woot! new entry.

so this is what it's come to
me running from you
hiding the words im dying to say.
i want to tell you
but i don't know how.
i want you to know
but i don't think you'll care.
it kills me to do this
it tears me apart
to hide from these feelings
and hide from the light.


im gunna write another one here this time.

your eyes make me silent
your voice makes me calm
when i see your smile...
it makes me want to shine
everything about you
makes me happy
and filled with glee.

uhh....im done.
i only want true comments. if you thought it was bad or could use improvement TELL ME. thats how i get better






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Chocotate
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commentCommented on: Thu Sep 06, 2007 @ 09:17pm
Awww how sweet ^__^


commentCommented on: Thu Sep 06, 2007 @ 11:42pm
the first one's got a lot of feeling and it's like you're writing to someone. The second is so adorable! I luv it!! XD



Tantagel
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Sage-Hyuuga
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commentCommented on: Fri Sep 07, 2007 @ 06:29pm
you first one sounds like that akon song you know, you want to tell them but you can't but i liked it


commentCommented on: Sun Sep 30, 2007 @ 01:59am
i liked them both..I think somethings wrong with me I havent been able to write a single poem since the ending of school!!!



hypergurl_93
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