Rieko: *Walks down the road with katana unsheathed*
Alec: So, you decided to come?
Rieko: You killed my sister, why wouldn't I come?
Alec: Revenge smells so sweet! Shall we dance? *Draws a greatsword from the air.
Rieko: Yah! *Thrusts foreward and slashes in every direction*
Alec: *Blocks all of the strikes* Hahahaha! You'll have to do better than that if you want to kill me!
Rieko: You'll pay for what you did to Alisa!!! *Jumps back and throws a fireball*
Alec: Hmpf! *Smacks the fireball to the ground8 Pathetic! Why was it you two who inherited the swords? You can't even wield them both!!!
Rieko: Shut up!!! *Stabs sword into the ground and launches a flurry of fireballs* Ahhhh!!!
Alec: Rhhaa! *Slashes the fireballs as the come to him.*Jumps into the air* What will you do when you kill me huh? Are you going to save the world with that sword?!?!
Rieko: Damn you!!! She loved you!!! And you just killed her like she was nothing!!! *Throws bigger fireballs faster*
Alec: She was just another girl! She meant nothing! Love? There was no way she could have loved me! She said it herself before she died! *Blocks the fireballs*
Rieko: Rhaaaaaa!!!! *Leaps into the air and grabs at Alec.*
Alec: Wha!?! *Tries to pry her hands off*
Rieko: Now you die!!!
3 Weeks ago...
Wednesday
Alisa: Did you see him? Cute huh?
Rieko: I guess. You don't think it's kinda weird that he just showed up and no one knows anything about him?
Alisa: Yeah, but that's what makes him so hot. He is an enigma! A total mystery!
Rieko: Whatever, we have to hurry or we'll be late.
Third period
Rieko: So, how did your test go?
Zack: Failed, as usual. What did you get?
Rieko: B+. *Turns to Zach* Why are all the lockers so damn small?
Zack: *Crams stuff into his locker* I don't know...Mabe to save money?
Rieko: Weirdo.
Zack: What?
Rieko: I thought you were going to cut and dye your hair. Any longer and you'll be able to pass as a girl.
Zack: My hair is fine. Red is a common color in my family. What I don't get is why you don't dye your silver hair. It is very odd ya know. You and your sister both.
Rieko: Shut up. We like our hair. *Turns and starts towards 4th period chemistry*
Later spaz.
Zack: Bye old lady. *Walks in the opposite direction*
After school
Rieko: Alisa, what took so long?
Alisa: I talked to that guy!
Rieko: And?
Alisa: His name is Alec! He is a senior and he likes swimming! We were made for eachother!
Rieko: Your crazy.
Alisa: I am going to ask him out!
Rieko: Whatever.
Alisa: C'mon! Your my sister! Your supposed to help with these things!
Rieko: No.
Alisa: Aww...*sniff.sniff*
Rieko: Damnit. Fine, what do you want me to do?
Alisa:Yay! Ok, I'm going to write a letter and I want you to deliver it! *Hugs Rieko*
Rieko: Your such a con artist...
Thursday
1st period
Alisa: Ok, so all you have to do is take it to him.
Rieko: I know.
Alisa: You're the best!
Rieko: Yeah, yeah. *Takes the letter and walks off*
Alisa: Thank you! *Waves and runs off*
Present
Rieko: And then you guys hit it off, didn't you!?!
Alec: I just went out with her like she wanted! I didn't find out til the second week that she and you were the descendants of Rae! I wanted the swords so I cuold obtain the same power! How can one resist the power to move mountains and destroy planets!?!?
Rieko: She loved you more than anything!!!
Alec: There is no way! She tried to kill me!
Rieko: She was protecting the sword! The sword that I am going to kill you with right now!!!*Impales Alec in the heart*
Alec: Ugh!*cough*
Rieko: *Drops Alec to the ground* She wanted you to have this.*Pulls a necklace from her pocket and throws it to Alec*
Alec: Uh? *Opens the locket to find a picture of him and Alisa. On the inside it says: To my love, always and forever.*
Rieko: You killed the only person that cared, and you didn't even care.
Alec: No...I loved her...I thought...That if I could obtain..*Coughs violently* That power...I could keep us together...Forever...*Dies*
Rieko: Mabe in the next life you can meet her in heaven...
Kenji: *Narrates*: The world is complicated...People love and hate, sometimes without a reason. Sometimes, it clouds judgement and carrupts souls, but in the end, love shows us our mistakes that we have made.
END
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Book of Ten-thousand Years
Book of my past lives.
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i like the parts where it flashes backwards but the last scene in the present just didnt hit me the right way . . . it seemed really rushed and you so could have went more in depth into these characters and their relationship. can you write flashback sequels? that'd be awesome.
ps. for your next one add water . . . lots and lots of water. (i'm talking tsunami massive amounts of water ^_^)