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Hime-chan...
Please give me a good title to name the story....(Part 1)
This is just a story I've been working on...for like ages. Thought I'd post it just for the heck!

VEZMONT MANSION

Sixteen year old Aya, woke up early in the morning in their big luxurious mansion. Aya is very attractive- she has shimmering, blonde hair and tantalizing blue eyes. She has voluptuous breasts and a curvaceous body. She’s cute…petite, cheerful and happy as well.
She walked outside her room and into her brothers’ room. Her brothers are both of the same age. They were both exhausted after last night’s deed and were both asleep in bed.
“Good morning!” Aya jumped in between her brothers and woke them up.
“Aya!” her older brother (kuya), Andre said smiling at her. Andre had soft, white hair and gorgeous green eyes. He is tall and has a lean body. He has abs and white, soft skin. Andre always smiles. Aya doesn’t know why, but she likes it anyway.
“Aya, do you mind? I need some sleep,” said Aya’s older brother Chris. Chris had soft raven, black hair and enticing blue eyes. He is just as tall as Andre. He also has a lean body with abs and a pierced ear. Chris is the bad boy type, but Aya likes it though. She thinks it’s cute.
“Why? Is it so bad to greet my two best kuyas in the world after their deed last night?” Aya said pouting.
“Aya, why are you so cute?” said her kuya, Andre, putting an arm around her.
Aya’s brothers have been taking care of her ever since their parents died. How they died is still a mystery. But they were able to move on and continue the family business. By the way, if you’re wondering about the family business-they are professional killers. They kill for a living.
“So how was last night’s deed?” Aya asked.
“It was okay,” said Andre. “It only took us 3 minutes to kill the whole clan.
“It would’ve taken us a minute if you hadn’t forgotten to recharge with Kanaya.”

**Kanaya is a special energy one must have in order to use his/her special abilities. Kanaya comes from the goddess of the moon, Luna, a gift to her chosen people. A person cannot use his/her abilities without Kanaya. One can recharge his/her Kanaya only at night, under the moon. One must also say the special incantation:

The moon is light to the darkness of night. My power comes from the goddess of thee. Send forth, my holy queen and shower me with thy heaven-sent gift.

“Aya, shouldn’t you be going to school?” Andre asked.
“Oh, my God. I forgot!” Aya exclaimed. She jumped out of the bed and rushed outside the door.
“Tsk, tsk, tsk…Aya is so forgetful.” Andre said.

SCHOOL

“s**t, I’m going to be late!” Aya said to herself, looking at her watch, rushing to school. She went inside the building and ran past the principal’s office. The door opened and came out the principal with some new student. Aya passed the principal and the new student with her long hair fluttering behind her. Aya’s barrette fell, but she didn’t notice.
“Oh, s**t! I’m so dead,” she exclaimed to herself, nearing towards her classroom. As she slammed the door open-“ding-dong”, the bell rang.
“Aya, you just made it in time,” greeted one of her classmates.
“What a relief,” she said panting after rushing to school. Aya went to her seat. The classroom door opened, and their teacher came in with the new student.
“Class, I want you to meet you’re new classmate,” said their teacher Ms.Kana. “Please introduce yourself.”
“Hi, I’m Rye Leigh. It’s nice to meet you all,” Rye greeted. Rye had soft, light–blue hair and green eyes. He is tall and lean (and of course) with abs. He spotted Aya and walked towards her.
“What the hell is he up to?” the class had muffled whispers.
“Is there something wrong?” Aya asked.
“I believe this is yours, “ Rye handed Aya her barrette.
“My barrette, thank you,” she said, slightly blushing. She slowly got her barrette from Rye’s smooth hand.
“Ah! I see you have made an acquaintance to each other,” said Ms.Kana. “Would you like to do the honors being Mr. Rye’s school buddy, Ms. Vezmont?
The whole class was looking intently at Aya as if it were the last judgement. “Yes, ma’am” Aya said in a soft voice, looking down.

SCHOOL, BREAK TIME

Aya and Rye were walking around the campus.
“Hi, I wasn’t able to properly introduce myself a while ago; I’m Aya.” Aya smiled cheerfully at Rye. “Rye…” he said blankly.
“So much for a cheerful greeting,” Aya thought.” By the way thanks for returning my barrette.” She said
Rye stopped walking.
“Is there something wrong?” Aya asked.
“I hear someone crying…” Rye said.
“Me too, I think it’s coming from over there.”
They went towards the playground, where the kindergartners were playing. And behind the bushes, there was a little boy, who wound himself in the knee, crying alone. Rye went and took a look at the little boy’s wound. “It’s nothing serious,” Rye said comfortingly to the boy.” I’ll take you to the Infirmary, he was about to lift the boy but then…
“Wait, you don’t have to,” Aya said. She kneeled close to the little boy and put her hands over the boy’s wound. Then yellow light glowed around Aya’s hand and the wound healed.
“Now you’re all better.” Aya said smiling warmly at the boy.
“Thank you, ate,” the boy said with a cheerful smile.
“Ken,” a kid appeared behind Aya and Rye. “We’ve been looking all over for you. Come on, let’s play soccer.”
“Okay!” the little boy stood up and ran towards the other kids. “Thank you, ate. Thank you, kuya.”
The boy waved at them as he ran back to the playground.
“I’m glad he’s okay.” Aya said.
“Kanaya…”
“What about it?” Aya asked.
“I didn’t expect someone like you to have it.” Rye said.
This offended Aya. What did he mean by “someone like me?”
“hmph…” Aya turned her head away from Rye.
“Did I offend you?” Rye asked. Aya did not answer.
Rye laughed.
“What’s so funny?” Aya asked scowling at Rye.
“You look so cute when you’re mad.” Rye intended this as a joke.
Aya blushed at this statement. “Really?” she thought.
Rye stood up and offered a hand to Aya. Aya held his hand and stood up. And they continued their walk around the campus.
“Kanaya is a special gift from the Goddess of the moon, Luna.” Rye explained. “Every person in the world has special abilities they and others are not aware of. That’s why these abilities do not manifest because the person doesn’t know they exist. With Kanaya, all the potentials of a person is released, but only a few are able to use Kanaya.”
“You know a lot about Kanaya.” Aya said. “Do you, by any chance, are able to use it?”
“Yes…” Rye answered. Rye took out a gun from his pocket and shot the trunk of the tree. It bore a hole through the tree and also through the next tree behind.
“No bullet…” Aya said amazed by what she saw.
“I use wind,” Rye said. “With Kanaya I can control the wind through my gun.”
“Amazing!” Aya turned around and faced Rye. “You’re so good!” she said to him smiling with her blue eyes gleaming.
“Thanks…” Rye blushed. “Aya IS cute,” he thought.

TBC heart heart





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    muffiechu
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    Thu Jun 28, 2007 @ 02:09pm


    Very well-written *clap*

    How about a name like..umm "Kanaya Spell" very uncreative, I know.


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