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~*Poetry*~

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To Death To Death I love you to death I loath you to death Breath in, deep breaths Steal away my breath You smile at me in your arms You laugh as you kill me I love you, your perfect charms Don't care that I'm screaming Follow the night, look up above Your knife to my throat You are the only one one I love You are the one that I loath In your tight embrace I feel no fears Fill my empty heart with tears You wipe away my falling tears Conciously adding to my overwhelming fears It's everything about you that I love It's everything about you that I loath To Death To Death

Posted by: I Speak Muffin Thu Jun 07, 2007 @ 10:14pm

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sugarbaby10101
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Commented on: Sat Jun 09, 2007 @ 03:27am


	I think this is definitely the best poem you've written. The two sides is just brilliant. You have such an amazing gift with poetry, and you have so much potential. You really should major in writing and write poetry. I know I would buy your poems.

Commented on: Mon Jun 18, 2007 @ 09:33pm


	wow thats deep

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luckynaj
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Commented on: Tue Jun 26, 2007 @ 05:07am


	this is truly well crafted and put together nicely... very harmonized

Commented on: Wed Jul 04, 2007 @ 09:05pm


	like it. like the two sides to the poem.

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